Revision Activity #1

I was made aware of "Gender Analyzer" and "Gender Genie" in one of the classes I took (EngL 4722: Alphabet to Internet: A History of Writing Technologies) at the U of MN last year during my sabbatical. I'm wondering if having my writing students use one of these sites during the writing process might somehow inspire revisions of a different sort--perhaps word choice, tone, etc.

"Gender Analyzer" seems to be strictly for online sites--one cannot upload a paper or text to this site for analysis.

"The Gender Genie" does allow for typing or pasting text into a box for analysis.

To try it out, I copied and pasted the text from a short non-fiction piece I had written in 2000 for the Minnesota Writing Project. The narrative is titled, "Where's the Whistle," and all of my current students have access to a copy of this.

Unfortunately, and embarrassingly, for me, "The Gender Genie" analysis determined that the writer of the piece was FEMALE! Yes, I kid you not. Here's the analysis:

• Words: 1210
• Female Score: 1690
• Male Score: 1561
• "The Gender Genie thinks the author of this page is: female!"

Hmm. I guess I've always been bookish and sensitive, but this is a little much. I'm going to go cry now. (Just kidding!)

I then tried typing my blog URL into "Gender Analyzer." This didn't help my ego much either. Their guess was 51% that it was written by a woman, but they admitted it was quite "gender neutral." (Thanks!) Hmm. I'm starting to think about the skit, "It's Pat," from Saturday Night Live, years ago!

Have fun with it. Does it change your opinion of your paper at all? Are you going to rewrite in any way based on this analysis? Let me know!

Group Project for CI 5410 (Fall 2008)

I've just completed my sabbatical report for 2008-2009 and, while composing it, I realized that I had not yet posted this presentation to my blog.

In the fall of 2008, I took two classes at the University of Minnesota. One of those classes, "Special Topics in Literacy: Struggling Adolescent Readers," required a small-group project/presentation, which resulted in the following slideshow.

I gratefully acknowledge my two collaborators, Katie Bruhn (high school) and Emily Olson (middle school), for their contributions to this presentation; it was probably the best group project I was involved in during my sabbatical year and classwork. Thanks!

Graphic Novels

As recently promised to a fellow teacher-scholar (Brent, teaching in Hopkins), here are a few of the graphic novels I'm considering for near-future literature classes. The first one is a collection of graphic short stories, all based on stories by Edgar Allan Poe:



I discovered another graphic novelist in a class I just completed at the University of Minnesota, Spring 2009: EngL 4722: From Alphabet to Internet: A History of Writing Technologies (Prof. Michael Hancher)--and I really recommend this class! The writer/artist's name is Adrian Tomine, and apparently he's done some really cool cover art work for The New Yorker magazine. Here's the book I'm considering:



A third novel under consideration is pretty obvious, I guess--obvious to those in the know, which doesn't always include me! Also, apparently, one of my nephews just did a presentation on this one for his Popular Literature class at University of Minnesota, Morris:



And finally, just because I love this comic strip. And, yes, I know that comic strips are not the same as graphic novels. But this cat is too funny:



That's all for now. Let me know your suggestions. I'm just getting into the groove ... or do I dare say it, Groovitude:

TagCloud for Bartleby

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ARCC English Division Meeting 2009-04-08

Here are a few links I might be mentioning in my presentation at the English Division meeting today:

Video:

• YouTube Video: "A Vision of Students Today"

Wikis & Wikibooks:

• UMN Prof. Richard Beach's course/textbook resource wiki
• Matt Barton's Rhetoric and Composition wikibook

Tag/Text Clouds:

• Wordle
• TagCrowd

Podcasts:

• EdTechTalk
• Teachers Teaching Teachers
• EdTechWeekly
• Women of Web 2.0
• Digital Campus
• EdTechCrew
• The Tech Teachers

Let me know if you have any questions!

Book Recommendations & Practicing APA Style

Some people have been asking me what I've been reading in my UMN classes on my sabbatical, so here's a reading list for everyone, in APA style (for some reason, the preferred style in most education courses). I've just included the many books; there have been many, many more articles. If you're interested in the articles, let me know and I'll show them to you; I also have digital copies of nearly all of the articles, if you want one or more.

EngL 4722 / "Alphabet to Internet: History of Writing Technologies" (Spring 2009)

• Anderson, B. (1983). Imagined communities: Reflections on the origin and spread of nationalism. London: Verso.
  
• Ong, W. J. (1982). Orality and literacy. London: Routledge.
• Tribble, E. B., & Trubek, A. (2003). Writing material: Readings from Plato to the digital age. New York: Longman.
• Zaid, G. (2003). So many books: Reading and publishing in an age of abundance. N. Wimmer (Trans.). Philadelphia: Paul Dry Books.

EdPA 5704 & EPsy 5451 / "College Students Today" (Spring 2009)

• Baxter Magolda, M. B. (2001). Making their own way: Narratives for transforming higher education to promote self-development. Sterling, VA: Stylus.
• Colby, A., Beaumont, E., et al. (2007). Educating for democracy: Preparing undergraduates for responsible political engagement. San Francisco: Jossey-Bass.
  
• Harper, S. R., & Quaye, S. J. (2009). Student engagement in higher education: Theoretical perspectives and practical approaches for diverse populations. New York: Routledge.
• Kuh, G. D., Kinzie, J., et al. (2005). Student success in college: Creating conditions that matter. San Francisco: Jossey-Bass.
• Levin, J. S. (2007). Nontraditional students and community colleges: The conflict of justice and neoliberalism. New York: Palgrave Macmillan.

CI 5330 & CI 5475 / "Teaching Digital Writing: Blogs, Wikis, Online Talk, Podcasting, and E-portfolios to Teach Writing" (Fall 2008)

• Beach, R., Anson, C., et al. (2009). Teaching writing using blogs, wikis, and other digital tools. New York: Columbia Teachers College Press. (?)
• Gardner, S., & Birley, S. (2008). Blogging for dummies (2nd ed.). Hoboken, NJ: Wiley.
• Hendron, J. G. (2008). RSS for educators: Blogs, newsfeeds, podcasts, and wikis in the classroom. Eugene, OR: International Society for Technology in Education.
  
• Morris, T., Tomasi, C., & Terra, E. (2008). Podcasting for dummies (2nd ed.). Hoboken, NJ: Wiley.

CI 5410 / "Struggling Adolescent Readers" (Fall 2008)

• Schoenbach, R., Greenleaf, C., Cziko, C., & Hurwitz, L. (1999). Reading for understanding: A guide to improving reading in middle and high school classrooms: The Reading Apprenticeship guidebook. San Francisco: Jossey-Bass and WestEd.
  

EdPA 5704 Article Presentation

Citation:

Bartholomae, David. "Inventing the University." When a Writer Can’t Write: Studies in Writer’s Block and Other Composing Process Problems. Ed. Mike Rose. New York: Guilford, 1985. 134-165. Rpt. in Cross-Talk in Comp Theory: A Reader. Ed. Victor Villanueva, Jr. Urbana, IL: NCTE, 1997. 589-619.

Summary:

"Inventing the University" means learning to speak the language of higher education--more specifically, having to speak (and write) the discourses of the various communities (usually, academic disciplines) of college. This skill is asked of students quite quickly, usually before the skill is "learned," and this can cause problems. Most college freshman do not yet know the conventions, they do not yet know the jargon, and they cannot yet create (or sustain) a voice of authority, particularly when the audience is their professors; the students may be aware of this "privileged" language, but they cannot yet control it. In section II, Bartholomae reviews the general theory of audience awareness, the cognitive theorists’ view of the composing process compared to the social theorists’ view, and contemporary rhetorical theory’s concept of “’codes’ that constitute discourse” and applies them to the idea of "inventing the university." In section III, Bartholomae provides and then analyzes five representative samples of student writing (out of 500 placement essays reviewed), eventually ranking them based on how the writers’ "ability to imagine privilege enabled writing" (607). Ultimately, educators must accept that as our students struggle with a difficult and unfamiliar language, their papers will not be error-free nor have elegant syntax.

Why It Was Important to Me:

• "Discourse communities"--also, "interpretive communities" (Fish)
• Definition(s) of "basic writers"
• Definition(s) of "commonplace"
• "Writer-based prose" vs. "reader-based prose"
• Cognitive vs. social-epistemic composing theories
• Types or frequencies of error

Why I Find It Professionally Useful:

• "Much of the written work that students do is test-taking, report, or summary--work that places them outside the official discourse of the academic community, where they are expected to admire and report on what we do, rather than inside that discourse, where they can do its work and participate in a common enterprise" (599).
• "One response to the problems of basic writers, then, would be to determine just what the community’s conventions are, so that those conventions could be written out, 'demystified' and taught in our classrooms" (601).
• "In fact, one of the problems with curricula designed to aid basic writers is that they too often begin with the assumption that the key distinguishing feature of a basic writer is the presence of sentence-level error" (612).

Recommended Reading:

• Graff, Gerald, and Cathy Birkenstein. "They Say/I Say": The Moves That Matter in Academic Writing. New York: Norton, 2006.

Google Docs Presentation Link

Google Docs Presentation: